This blog contains my Proposal (alongside it's many changes)
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The advertisement is for Math Tutoring. It starts off showing two teenagers in class, being taught by a short math teacher (who looks exactly like this or this), however both the students are either bored and/or really stressed out doing math on their papers, before Rick Sanchez from the hit show Rick and Morty, aka the smartest man in the multiverse, appears from a portal behind them, then helps them solve the difficult math questions on their papers, inviting them to leave and ditch this class afterwards, following Rick into the portal into multiversal adventures. And the ending then has the short math teacher as mentioned before having a shocked face, trying to comprehend what just happened, for comedic effect of course. After that, we get the logo/icon of the math tutor icon company.
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My teacher gave me suggestions to make rick's character accurate, and to change it to EF, probably because the name is better/makes more sense.
The advertisement is for EF Tutoring. It starts off showing two teenagers in class, being taught by a short EF teacher (who looks exactly like this or this), however both the students are either bored and/or really stressed out doing English on their papers, before Rick Sanchez from the hit show Rick and Morty, aka the smartest man in the multiverse, appears from a portal behind them, then tells them that schoolwork is stupid, inviting them to leave and ditch this class afterwards, following Rick into the portal into multiversal adventures. While it seems like going through multiversal adventures is going to help them with their grades, they return to class and it shows that they got an F on their paper. Their teacher is then left distraught/shocked, trying to comprehend what just happened, for comedic effect of course. It then cuts to text saying, "Don't follow Rick Sanchez, follow EF".
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Another suggestion my teacher gave me is to make it so that it shows a regular school instead of EF since it'd be odd to show that the EF facility is where you'd fail.
The advertisement starts with two teeangers, a guy and a girl, in a room doing their homework. However, Rick Sanchez from the hit TV show Rick and Morty appears from a portal behind them, and the teenagers ask Rick to help them with their homework, but Rick is like "yeah yeah whatever but look come look at this", before inviting them to go through the portal to have some epic multiversal adventures. After it quickly cuts to them going to a regualr school, submitting their homework to a teacher, only for the teacher to stamp a large red "F" on the paper. Then it cuts to the EF building, with non-diegetic text saying "Don't follow Rick, follow EF".
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Update: I slightly changed it to fit the new update from my "My Target Audience" blog, basically just replacing EF with Math Core, the name of my product, and I also put Kumon, an existing company as well, which was also in the "My Target Audience" Blog as well. I also added a feww changes such as the non-diegetic text and purple/blue background at the end and fixing it to, once again, fit my aforementioned Target Audience blog. Also added ever so slightly more detail and text to Rick going through portals.
The advertisement starts with two teeangers, a guy and a girl, in a room doing their homework. However, Rick Sanchez from the hit TV show Rick and Morty appears from a portal behind them, and the teenagers ask Rick to help them with their homework, but Rick is like "yeah yeah whatever but look come look at this", before inviting them to go through the portal to have some epic multiversal adventures, practically ignoring and ditching their schoolwork for some fun times. After that, it quickly cuts to them going to a regualr school, submitting their homework to a teacher, only for the teacher to stamp a large red "F" on the paper. Then it cuts to some purple and/or blue background with some non-diegetic text saying, "Don't follow Rick, follow Math Core" with the kumon logo somewhere under it.
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Last Minute Update: Made a few changes to make it slightly more detailed and more "formal", and also wanted to put something in here that was in my first version of this proposal.
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MINI SELF-REFLECTION: While my original proposal was fairly different from my current proposal, I gotta say I'm really proud with the clever idea I came up with by having the smartest men alive guide a bunch of normal teenagers, it really resonates with the audience a lot. Like I'm really, really, proud of how interesting and unique my (with my teacher's help admittedly) advertisement's direction went for.
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